四六级

2017上半年六级写作:文章结构分析(十)

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      考试都是有技巧的,六级写作也是如此。想要在短短的30分钟内写出一篇质量上乘的作文来,平时就要做好各方面的准备,即使是多背几篇六级作文范文也可以提高写作成绩,以下是小编今天要讲的文章。

            Choose a Particuler Brand for Children

      为小学生选择一种牌子的面包

            六级参考范文如下:

      You have been asked to recommend a particularbrand of bread for use in elementary schools in asmall city. Which of the four brands of breaddescribed in the chart would you recommend?Support your choice with information from the chartbelow.

      Which brand of bread is the most suitable forelementary school children? Before we make thechoice, there are three things we need to take into account: taste, nutrition and cost.

      Among the three, I believe nutrition is the most important. Children in elementary schools areat an age when their bodies are growing rapidly. Malnutrition will certainly hinder their bodiesfrom growing, and poor health will often result in poor learning. Taste is also important becausetasty bread can help stimulate children's appetite. Children will not like to eat poor-tastingbread regardless of its level of nutrition. A good appetite guarantees sufficient nutrition.

      Therefore, I will certainly recommend Brand A, because both its nutrition and taste are verygood.

      Neither Brand C nor Brand D is a good choice because the former has a very good nutritionalrating but not a good taste; while the latter has an excellent taste but only a fair nutritionalrating.

      Being less nutritional and tasteful, Brand B is not as good a choice as Brand A, despite theirsimilar costs. So, that leaves only Brand A. It is true that Brand A has the highest price, but Ibelieve that most of the schools would not really mind paying a little bit more money for schoolchildren's better health.

      文章结构:

      ·Which brand of bread to choose?

      * Three factors to be considered: nutrition, taste and cost

      ·Nutrition as against taste

      * A comparison

      * Importance of nutrition

      * Importance of taste

      * Decision

      ·An analysis

      * Brand C and Brand D

      * Brand B

      * Final choice — A

      * Price — no problem

      亮点表达:

      take... into account 考虑……

      at an age when... 在……的年龄

      malnut rition n. 营养不良

      hinder v. 防止,妨碍

      regardless of 不管, 不顾

      despite prep. 尽管

      It is true that... 诚然

          以上就是小编为大家准备的一篇范文,希望大家抓紧考前的时间认真备考,争夺六级高分!想了解更多2017年6月英语四六级备考资讯,请点击文都网校四六级资讯站!

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