四六级

2017上半年六级写作:文章结构分析(三十五)

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      考试都是有技巧的,六级写作也是如此。想要在短短的30分钟内写出一篇质量上乘的作文来,平时就要做好各方面的准备,即使是多背几篇六级作文范文也可以提高写作成绩,以下是小编今天要讲的文章。

           参考范文:

      About the Mobile Phone

      Human creativeness is boundless. With the advanceof science and technology, a completely new meansof communication — the Mobile Phone — came tothe world, which, being not fixed in one place likeordinary phones, greatly facilitates telephonecommunication.

      The mobile phone spreads so rapidly, first frombusinessmen to office workers, then to townshipenterprise managers, then to journalists and then nowadays to people of all trades andprofessions. At present, it seems that nowhere we do not hear the musical ringing of the mobilephone . People at first buy phones for convenience and later for fashion. To occupy thisincreasingly big market, the manufacturers are worrying their brains into making various typesof phones, large or small, coloured or black and white, multi-functional or with video cameras,to satisfy the needs. New fashions appear almost every day.

      However, it is a great pity that the inventors of the mobile phone did not expect the negativeeffects caused by their scientific merits. Because of the abuse of the mobile phone, aircraftmechanism refuses to work properly, libraries are no longer so quiet, restaurants are filled withnoisy phone talk, teaching is incessantly interrupted by the signals...

      Here, in the picture, a concert is going on. The pianist is supposed to be playing Beethoven'ssymphony when, all of a sudden, a man with a tie stood up, talking loudly over his mobilephone and telling his friend that he was attending a concert of classical music. The audienceshuddered with panic and the pianist was nearly shocked to death.

      It is not infrequent that the above scene happens in public places. True, human beings havethe right to enjoy modern civilization, nevertheless, should they know how to conductthemselves in the modern civilized society?

      文章结构:

      ·completely new means of communication — the Mobile Phone

      ·The rapid spreading of the mobile phone

      * People who use the phone

      * From convenience to fashion

      * The manufacturers

      ·The negative effects of the phone , e.g.

      ·The interpretation of the cartoon

      ·Comments

      亮点表达:

      creativeness n. 创造性

      boundless a. 无限的

      means of commu nication 通讯工具

      not fixed in one place 不固定在一处

      facilitate v. 使容易

      township enterprise 乡镇企业

      journalist n. 记者

      people of all trades and professions 各行各业人士

      nowhe re we do not... 我们无处不……(双重否定)

      manufacturer n. 制造商, 厂家

      wor ry one's brain into 绞尽脑汁, 费尽心机

      multi-functional a. 多功能的

      satisfy one's needs 满足……要求

      It is a pity that... 遗憾的是……

      negative effect 负效应

      merit n. 业绩, 功绩

      abuse n. 滥用

      aircraft mechanism 航空装置

      incessantly interrupted 不断被打断

      concert n. 音乐会

      pianist n. 钢琴家

      Beethoven's symphony 贝多芬交响乐

      all of a sudden 突然

      shuddered with panic 吓得发抖

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