四六级

2017上半年六级写作:文章结构分析(三十三)

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      考试都是有技巧的,六级写作也是如此。想要在短短的30分钟内写出一篇质量上乘的作文来,平时就要做好各方面的准备,即使是多背几篇六级作文范文也可以提高写作成绩,以下是小编今天要讲的文章。

          参考范文:

      With SARS gradually passing its peak, more andmore people take off their gauze masks. They feelreleased and have more freedom to breathe in freshair. However, a certain number of people haverestored their bad habit and start to spiteverywhere. Now and then, whether in the street, oron the bus, or in city gardens, we will see somepeople, the fine ladies and gentlemen, spittingwithout feeling a bit ashamed as shown in thepicture. When shown the "no spitting!" sign, they just turn a blind eye to it. Still worse, peoplearound have to be on guard against the sudden at tack of "spits hot" from the spitters.

      Spitting is a terrible habit. For one thing, it is entirely uncivilized. The world has entered the21st century and human civilization has reached a more advanced stage. Why can't thosepeople remove this ugly habit? Is it because they think the earth is a gigantic spit toon? Foranother thing, spitting does great harm to public health. According to chemical laboratory test,one sputum contains thousands upon thousands of germs and SARS viruses if the spitter is aSARS sufferer. As was reported, the Beijing municipal government once mobilized an army of athousand sanitation workers to clean out the mess in Tian An Men Square.

      For people to get rid of this uncivilized behaviour, we suggest local authorities strengtheneducation by publicizing the harmfulness of spitting, and at the same time, enforce the law ofpunishment.

      Finally, we, citizens of the earth, must be self-disciplined, love our mother earth and don'tdirty her.

      文章结构:

      ·漫画描述

      * SARS后的故伎重施

      * 当心“痰弹”

      ·陋习不改的原因与危害

      * 大地本身是个大痰盂吗?

      * 传播细菌和病毒

      ·建议

      * 加强教育

      * 重罚

      * 爱护大地母亲

      亮点表达:

      take off their gauze masks 卸下口罩

      passing its peak 过了高峰期

      feel released 感到释然

      restore their bad habit 恢复陋习

      feel ashamed 感到惭愧

      turn a blind eye to... 对……视而不见

      still worse 更糟糕的是

      guard against 提防

      "spit shot" “痰弹”

      spitter n. 吐痰者

      gigantic spit toon 大痰盂

      sputum n. 痰

      virus n. 病毒

      municipal government 市政府

      mobilize v . 动员

      an army of thousand sanitation worke rs 千名清洁工大军

      clean out the mess 清除痰迹

      local authorities 当地政府

      publicize v . 宣传

      enfor ce v . 加强

      self-disciplined a . 自律

      dir ty v . 弄脏

            以上就是小编为大家准备的一篇范文,希望大家抓紧考前的时间认真备考,争夺六级高分!想了解更多2017年6月英语四六级备考资讯,请点击文都网校四六级资讯站!

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