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2017上半年六级写作:文章结构分析(二十九)

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  考试都是有技巧的,六级写作也是如此。想要在短短的30分钟内写出一篇质量上乘的作文来,平时就要做好各方面的准备,即使是多背几篇六级作文范文也可以提高写作成绩,以下是小编今天要讲的文章。

        "Nowadays parents are too permissive with their children." Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

  谈谈你对父母溺爱孩子这种现象的看法

        参考范文:

  Today, few people would defend the traditional attitude to children. If you recall what happened in old days, you would be astonished at the severe and strict education for children, for instance, old-fashioned spanking was common punishment for children. As a result, while the parents thus established their own authority, the poor children would never recover from the dreadful traumatic experience when they grew up.

  However, as you know, things often go to extremes. Nowadays, parents' confidence in their own authority has been greatly undermined. Countless articles in magazines and newspapers and tv programmes publicize childcare. When so much over-enthusiastic advice flying about, mum and dad just don't know what to do any more. In the end, they do nothing.

  So from early childhood, the kids are in charge and parents' lives are regulated according to the needs of their off spring. When the little dears develop into teenagers, they take complete control. If the young people are going to have a party, for example, parents are asked to leave the house. Their presence merely spoils the fun. What else can the poor parents do but obey?

  In my mind, a child certainly needs love, and a lot of it. But the excessive pe rmissiveness of modern parents is surely doing more harm than good. The spread of juvenile delinquency is largely due to parental laxity. Mother, believing that her little baobao can look after himself, is not at home when he returns f rom school, so little baobao roams the street. The dividing-line between permissiveness and sheer negligence is very fine indeed.

  文章结构:

  ·severe and strict education for children

  * spanking

  * children's dreadful experience

  ·things often go to extremes

  * parents' authority unde rmined

  * over-enthusiastic child care

  * parents'life regulated according to children's needs

  ·comments

  * excessive permissiveness and sheer negligence — a fine dividing line

  亮点表达:

  permissive (ness) a.(n.) 随意(的) ,放纵(的)

  be astonished at 对……感到吃惊

  spank (ing) v.(n.) 打屁股

  traumatic a. 受到创伤的

  things often go to extremes. 事情往往会走向极端

  undermine v. 瓦解

  regulate v. 调节

  offspring n. 儿女

  dear n. 亲爱的人

  obey v. 服从

  juvenile delinquency 青少年犯罪

  parental laxity 父母的疏忽

  roam v. 游荡

  dividing-line 分界线

  sheer negligence 完全忽视

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