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2017上半年六级写作:文章结构分析(二十八)

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      考试都是有技巧的,六级写作也是如此。想要在短短的30分钟内写出一篇质量上乘的作文来,平时就要做好各方面的准备,即使是多背几篇六级作文范文也可以提高写作成绩,以下是小编今天要讲的文章。

            About Juvenile Delinquency

      关于青少年犯罪

            参考范文:

      One of the much-talked-about present-day socialproblems is juvenile delinquency, and its rate offrequency is seemingly on the rise.

      It is reported in newspapers that the delinquentsrange in age from 12 to 18. Only a small portionhave committed serious crimes like kidnapping andmurdering. Those cases are handled through thecourt system. Most of the delinquencies fall into fourcategories: brawling, including gang fighting with deadly weapons; theft, mostly petty, sexuallypromiscuous behaviour and addiction to drugs. The delinquents are generally placed undertemporary supervision by neighbourhood committees, work units or reform schools.

      The causes of juvenile delinquency are varied. Through media we often come across thefollowing cases:

      Ill-treatment to teenagers by their step-fathers or stepmothers often lead to family tragedies.School pupil delinquents, being not properly cared for, have chronic behaviour problems. Theirparents are too busy either with business or with gambling. Still, there are cases resulted fromparents' or grandparents' indulgence to their darlings. Petty theft once or twice is notpunished but encouraged. Gradually these petty thieves grow addicted to stealing . Adolescentstried drugs mostly out of curiosity before they finally became habitual drug-takers.

      Not a few examples can be found around us in our daily life. Limited by time and space, I haveto skip them over. However, juvenile delinquency, being a serious social problem concerningthe young generation, certainly deserves special attention. I think of all the things we can do,the most fundamental one is deepening and strengthening education so as to ultimately savethe young.

      文章结构:

      ·青少年犯罪——— 社会热门话题

      ·现状

      * 犯罪种类

      * 处理

      ·犯罪原因分析

      ·加强教育, 拯救青少年

      亮点表达:

      its rate of frequency is seemingly on the rise (犯罪)频率似乎在上升

      It is reported that 据报道

      range from... to... 范围从……到……

      a small portion = a small number

      commit crimes 犯罪

      kidnap v. 绑架

      handled through the court system 由法院来处理

      fall into four cat egories 归结为四种

      br awling n . 斗殴

      gang fighting with deadly weapons 持凶器打群架, 械斗

      theft, petty theft 偷窃,小偷小摸

      sexually promiscuous behaviour 乱搞两性关系

      addiction to drugs 吸毒

      temporary supervision 临时监管

      neighbourhood committee 居民委员会

      the causes are varied 原因是多种多样的

      ill-treatment n. 虐待

      step-father (-mother) 继父/母

      tragedy n. 悲剧

      chronic behaviour problems 长期表现不良

      gambling n. 赌博

      result from 起因于

      indulgence to their darlings 溺爱子女

      adolscent 青年

      out of curiosity 出于好奇

      habitual a. 成习惯的, 习惯性的

      not a few = many

      unltima tely ad. 最终

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