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2017上半年六级写作:文章结构分析(二十五)

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      考试都是有技巧的,六级写作也是如此。想要在短短的30分钟内写出一篇质量上乘的作文来,平时就要做好各方面的准备,即使是多背几篇六级作文范文也可以提高写作成绩,以下是小编今天要讲的文章。

            Choose a Particuler Brand for Children

      为小学生选择一种牌子的面包

      参考范文:

      You have been asked to recommend a particular brand of bread for use in elementary schools in a small city. Which of the four brands of bread described in the chart would you recommend? Support your choice with information from the chart below.

      Which brand of bread is the most suitable for elementary school children? Before we make the choice, there are three things we need to take into account: taste, nutrition and cost.

      Among the three, I believe nutrition is the most important. Children in elementary schools are at an age when their bodies are growing rapidly. Malnutrition will certainly hinder their bodies from growing, and poor health will often result in poor learning. Taste is also important because tasty bread can help stimulate children's appetite. Children will not like to eat poor-tasting bread regardless of its level of nutrition. A good appetite guarantees sufficient nutrition.

      Therefore, I will certainly recommend Brand A, because both its nutrition and taste are very good.

      Neither Brand C nor Brand D is a good choice because the former has a very good nutritional rating but not a good taste; while the latter has an excellent taste but only a fair nutritional rating.

      Being less nutritional and tasteful, Brand B is not as good a choice as Brand A, despite their similar costs. So, that leaves only Brand A. It is true that Brand A has the highest price, but I believe that most of the schools would not really mind paying a little bit more money for school children's better health.

      文章结构:

      ·Which brand of bread to choose?

      * Three factors to be considered: nutrition, taste and cost

      ·Nutrition as against taste

      * A comparison

      * Importance of nutrition

      * Importance of taste

      * Decision

      ·An analysis

      * Brand C and Brand D

      * Brand B

      * Final choice — A

      * Price — no problem

      亮点表达:

      take... into account 考虑……

      at an age when... 在……的年龄

      malnut rition n. 营养不良

      hinder v. 防止,妨碍

      regardless of 不管, 不顾

      despite prep. 尽管

      It is true that... 诚然

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